Preliminary task peer feedback

The peer feedback from my task has helped me a lot as i have taken note of the EBI's so that i can use these in the future, and make my piece better and more effective. Also i received a lot of positive feedback on my piece which made me feel proud of my work.

Positive feedback (WWW): used a great rage of shots including high angle. used good match on action on the Juice carton and the Door handle, was a clever original idea with the Juice and CCTV, good editing effects, good innovation and flare,good shot reverse shot, flowed well.

Negative feedback (EBI): i didn't use a master shot to establish setting and scene, need to use more match on action and need to make it more interesting.

By doing this preliminary task i have improved my skill with camera work, and thought about match on action and the idea of continuity, i have also extended the knowledge of my media vocabulary, which helps when analysing peers. This will help me in the future when it comes to my final piece and coursework.